Okay I am having Mr. Wylie read the first part of what I have....Yay! If any of you don't know what is going on here is what I am trying to do:
-Nancy Drew based
-sort of like the board game "Clue"
~chapter 1~
-lunchlady dead from janitor killing her (in the beginning of story)
-student sees slaying of lunchlady and tells parents
-she meets with friends next day and get help from officer truffles
-girls help police and forensics team with case of lunchlady's death
-pizza man is janitors brother (still need a name for him)
-officer truffles dies from being shot in the head from janitor after supposed bank robbery
-janitor is arrested and his bro is brought in for questioning
-officer truffles's boss tells girl detectives that truffles died
-boss tells them that they are in charge of lunchlady case
~chapter 2~
-girls see blue moon
-three girls become detectives
-they finish solving lunchlady case and get assigned another one
Still trying to edit first chapter to make more sense....please be patient as I try to make "scenes" out of the 7 page mess!!!!
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